Logical and Smooth Flow

Traveling through time tickled Timothy’s toes. He particularly loved playing hide and seek in the tombs of the pharaohs, until he was sealed in. But no matter. Besides, his mother was calling. It was time to go home. That was only a week ago anyway.

WATCH FOR ABRUPT SHIFTS, IDENTIFY CHRONOLOGICAL CHANGES, ASK: ARE THEY NECESSARY, CLEAR, SMOOTH?